WALT: create mood in our writing.
I was at the Olympic games.There was a big crowd around me. I could see a woman winning a gold medal.I heard people screaming, people crying and my couch was crying as well.
I felt so so nervous when I got my gold medal. When I stood over there I feel so so so nervous because my family was crying as well and so I had to stand there.
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