WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
On Monday morning room 9 went outside to line up and we had an Egg race.
Mr Baxendine gave us a egg and Mr Baxendine gave us a spoon and then he us a egg and a colour and then we were drawing on the egg.
When we started the race some of them were cheating like me because I was holding on the egg.
Well my favourite part was we had to run with the egg on the spoon.
Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteI like your story about the egg race. I hope you had fun doing it. I hope to see more posts on you blog.
From Sheales
Hi Brooklyn
ReplyDeleteI like your writing. Remember to go back and to check your writing. What was your favourite part of the race?