Writing - Narrative

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling. Start Writing Here: One day there was me and my mum and dad and my mum’s family and my dad’s family went to kayaking in the dirty water and but the adult’s had to use the paddle so we could move and the kids had to be at the back of there mum and dad and I was so so scared that we must of fall but our mum and dad said it will be all right. It was at the clit we were very very tired from padding