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Thursday, 24 November 2016

Crazy Motat Adventures



Once upon a time there was a class that went on a trip to Motat on Tuesday. When we got there we thought that we were going to go as a taem in our groups. Mr  Baxendine told us what to do. We had to put our lunch box with a buddy in their bag. Then we went into the hall, we thought that we weren’t even going on the trip so I got angry.

At Motat we went on a tram and it was fun but we had to move to some other seats because there was poeple coming in and so we went back to where we were. There were 3 old men waiting for the tram to come pass and so we had to stop for them. It was raining and so we had to get our bags and go out of the place. They let us and claen up the mess that we had made. We then had to go outside and line up in our line’s so they can no where we are. When they can call out our names so we went back to school and some of us were sleeping in the bus just like ayla and I.

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Writing - Narrative




Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.



Start Writing Here:
One day there was me and my mum and dad and my mum’s family and my dad’s family went to kayaking in the dirty water and but the adult’s had to use the paddle so we could move and the kids had to be at the back of there mum and dad and I was so so scared that we must of fall but our mum and dad said it will be all right. It was at the clit we were very very tired from padding